One day Timmy was walking along the earth and he came to a stop because he saw an edge he went
back to where they were staying. He woke his boys up and got them to come to the edge. Timmy said
someone jump and see what happens so Tobias jumps and keeps falling. So then Jason Stomped on the
ground and made a hole and fell through the ground then there was only Timmy and Simeon. Simeon
tried to swing around onto the other side of the world he made it but there was no gravity And then only
Timmy was left. Timmy ordered the god of gravity Apocalypse to make the other side of the world
habitable but Apocalypse declined Then Timmy threw a brick at him and then screamed do it at the
top of his lungs. And then Timmy pulled out the almighty chicken nugget and threw it at Apocalypse
then he screamed stop i'll do it and that is how you can walk on the other side of the world.
back to where they were staying. He woke his boys up and got them to come to the edge. Timmy said
someone jump and see what happens so Tobias jumps and keeps falling. So then Jason Stomped on the
ground and made a hole and fell through the ground then there was only Timmy and Simeon. Simeon
tried to swing around onto the other side of the world he made it but there was no gravity And then only
Timmy was left. Timmy ordered the god of gravity Apocalypse to make the other side of the world
habitable but Apocalypse declined Then Timmy threw a brick at him and then screamed do it at the
top of his lungs. And then Timmy pulled out the almighty chicken nugget and threw it at Apocalypse
then he screamed stop i'll do it and that is how you can walk on the other side of the world.
Kia Ora Trent
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your myth on your blog. It always makes me smile how imaginative you are and I never quite know where your writing is going!
Next time perhaps you could add some more descriptive language in your writing so you are giving your reader a clearer picture in their minds.
Keep up the great blogging.
Miss H :-)
kia ora trent im riker from gisborne intermediate school
ReplyDeleteI really liked your myth and find it very interesting
do you think you could tell us what day it was on
thank you.
kind regards riker
:)