Friday 27 May 2016

Week Four Reflection

This week for writing we've been writing an article about Charlotte's web.


Charlotte’s Web Article


In the morning at Zuckerman’s barn There was a web spun in the cellar by a spider named Charlotte. It was a miracle Lurvey saw the words some pig embedded into the web.


who- Lurvey found the words some pig in the barn cellar in a web he needed to tell Zuckerman immediately. Zuckerman saw the amazing miracle he thought Wilbur was the one who did it. Mrs. Zuckerman saw it and thought the pig didn’t do this she said that's just stupid a pig can’t do that it was the spider. Charlotte spun the web that had the miracle words on it that everyone from around the world came to see.


what- The barn is big but not scary for the pig. The pig jumped and he posed as all the people walked by to look at the masterpiece. The words some pig there on the web this is a miracle said Zuckerman. This web in the barn is a worldwide attraction the words some pig are in the web everyone thought it was amazing.


Where- In the barn cellar there is a pig and a spider. Above the door in the barn cellar is a web it glistens and then when Zuckerman found out it was all over the news and he made the world wide attraction it was Charlotte's web. Zuckerman liked it being goo and busy at the barn Wilbur felt awesome.


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